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jesse,

sometimes you have to let go
of monsters and magic and guns
from the depths
of raven's garden,

let the music fill the night;
a river of time
for those slipping into the background,

defense devil,
let me fly like a bird
fetching the summer lady
in the valley of the butterflies.
KJ aka Lady Yume
~ please only share it with credit back to me; thank you :heart:

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My second ever title poem inspired by =DrippingWords' Mid Week Inspirations journal III (:

Titles used (with a little added additions/alterations):

jesse

sometimes you have to let go
monsters and magic and guns
from the depths
raven's garden

let the music fill the night
river of time
for those slipping into the background

defense devil
let me fly like a bird
fetching the summer lady
the valley of the butterflies.

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A Glory Be Journal Entry
:bulletgreen: Wednesday, November 13th 2013, Day 177
~ Originally started my Glory Be adventure on May 20th.
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shehrozeameen Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(jaw drop) Your title poem, is so well written... how?! How I ask myself...

:clap: truly, well done! I have nothing to say other than, a good piece leading to other well written pieces. Brilliantly handled. Bravo!
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:iconlady-yume:
:omg: Thank you so much for your lovely comment, my friend :heart:
Some of the credit though goes to DrippingWords for collecting all the titles in one of her Mid Week Inspirations over at Glory Be (:
I used solely those to write this!

Also, thank you for the group-request yet again!
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shehrozeameen Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) That's sweet. But frankly speaking, a true craftsman is one who can create art in any situation.

Your works are so much like your title, "yume". :hug: you're amazing.
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:iconlady-yume:
:omg: :blush: Thanks so much for your truly too sweet words - I'm both humbled and honoured :hug:
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:iconshehrozeameen:
shehrozeameen Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) :hug: you're an inspiration. What else can I say...
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DrippingWords Jan 9, 2014  Student Writer
:giggle:
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chromeantennae Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful. <3
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