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jesse,

sometimes you have to let go
of monsters and magic and guns
from the depths
of raven's garden,

let the music fill the night;
a river of time
for those slipping into the background,

defense devil,
let me fly like a bird
fetching the summer lady
in the valley of the butterflies.
© KJ aka Lady Yume
~ please only share it with credit back to me; thank you :heart:

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My second ever title poem inspired by =DrippingWords' Mid Week Inspirations journal III (:

Titles used (with a little added additions/alterations):

jesse

sometimes you have to let go
monsters and magic and guns
from the depths
raven's garden

let the music fill the night
river of time
for those slipping into the background

defense devil
let me fly like a bird
fetching the summer lady
the valley of the butterflies.

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A Glory Be Journal Entry
:bulletgreen: Wednesday, November 13th 2013, Day 177
~ Originally started my Glory Be adventure on May 20th.
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
:worship:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
Haha (: :heart:
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
:D :hug:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(jaw drop) Your title poem, is so well written... how?! How I ask myself...

:clap: truly, well done! I have nothing to say other than, a good piece leading to other well written pieces. Brilliantly handled. Bravo!
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014   Writer
:omg: Thank you so much for your lovely comment, my friend :heart:
Some of the credit though goes to DrippingWords for collecting all the titles in one of her Mid Week Inspirations over at Glory Be (:
I used solely those to write this!

Also, thank you for the group-request yet again!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) That's sweet. But frankly speaking, a true craftsman is one who can create art in any situation.

Your works are so much like your title, "yume". :hug: you're amazing.
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Writer
:omg: :blush: Thanks so much for your truly too sweet words - I'm both humbled and honoured :hug:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) :hug: you're an inspiration. What else can I say...
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014   Writer
:tighthug: :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Writer
:giggle:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Writer
:heart:~!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Writer
:iconloveluvplz:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful. <3
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013   Writer
Thank you, Ricky :heart:
I'm starting to love creating these title-poem-things, so I'm glad they're so wonderfully received!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, KJ. :heart:
It's really incredible and I'm sure it takes a lot of patience to find the right titles. :)
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   Writer
Thanks, sweet :heart:
And for now I can't take all the credits, as lovely Caitlan is the source of the inspiration journals (:
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Haha, ooh yes. :nod: =DrippingWords is awesome. :)
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013   Writer
She is, she is :love:
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:heart:
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:love:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: This is gorgeous.
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013   Writer
Thank you, sweet :love:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome. :heart:
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remanth Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing, I love it :)
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013   Writer
Thank you :heart:
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sonicallyy Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Brilliant 
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013   Writer
Thanks!
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Lunaracy47 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Wonderful! :happybounce:  :) (Smile)  
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013   Writer
Thank you :la:
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