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we met and fell
into a summer haze
with hearts racing
and fingertips
blazing,

lips
held secrets
only touch
could untangle,

days
were spend
with only words
slipping
across curves
and skin,

while
the august
heat
sweltered
and burned
memories
of forever
upon our
eager souls.
Kimberly Jolanda aka Lady Yume
~ please only share it with credit back to me; thank you Heart

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Summer is slowly seeping into the air, and I can hear it calling my name (:

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Written during Glory Be (2014)
Curious? Visit us here to discover more about the Glory-Be-Project (:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll be candid when I say that it reminded me of young love... most of the imagery had a "summertime sadness" feel, or the "wind of change" feel. It, to me, glorified that youthful aphrodisiac yearning to be free, listen to the soul, and just live life... for all its glory, mistakes and rewards alike...

Its decent, its a sweet work overall, and its subtle enough to give room for interpretation to any reader. With that said, its a good work :thumbsup:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 8, 2014   Writer
Thanks for your long comment with some lovely words about my piece :heart:
Glad to know you enjoyed it (:

Also thank-you for the group-request!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) That I did. Really.

:hmm: when? :paranoid:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 11, 2014   Writer
:heart:

The gallery requests I got from PoetrynProseWatchers round the same time as your comments? :)
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh those...! Well... I... (blushes, grins awkwardly)

(sigh) I like your works... but... it wasn't me... I can lend you the name of the person, if you'd like to know...
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 15, 2014   Writer
Please do, so I can thank him or her for it :rose:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) Sent a note. With his description...
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 17, 2014   Writer
Found it (:
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Leah084 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
Beautiful.
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you :rose:
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