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we met and fell
into a summer haze
with hearts racing
    and fingertips
    blazing,

    lips
held secrets
only touch
could untangle,

days
were spent
with only words
    slipping
    across curves
    and skin,

    while
the august
        heat
    sweltered
and burned
    memories
    of forever
        upon our
        eager souls
Kimberly Jolanda aka Lady Yume
~ please only share it with credit back to me; thank you Heart

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Summer is slowly seeping into the air, and I can hear it calling my name (:

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Written during Glory Be (2014)
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slenderblade Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
technical: spent
emotional: this is so sexy!
impressions: and I love the theme of fingertips that I've seen permeating your poetry <3

this really recalls nights spent with adrenaline rushes and goosebumps from fingertip explorations :giggle:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015   Writer
Wah! Typo; that's been a while - thank you (sometimes English verbs can stump a Dutchie like me :giggle:)
Thanks so much for the wonderful comment – I'm so glad you enjoyed it! You've really been walking through my gallery, making even me rediscover some of my own poems (:

And yes, I indeed have a thing for fingertips, guilty. (And eyes, and smiles; they are such expressive features of a person :heart:)
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slenderblade Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
:D yay! I look forward to more <3
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll be candid when I say that it reminded me of young love... most of the imagery had a "summertime sadness" feel, or the "wind of change" feel. It, to me, glorified that youthful aphrodisiac yearning to be free, listen to the soul, and just live life... for all its glory, mistakes and rewards alike...

Its decent, its a sweet work overall, and its subtle enough to give room for interpretation to any reader. With that said, its a good work :thumbsup:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 8, 2014   Writer
Thanks for your long comment with some lovely words about my piece :heart:
Glad to know you enjoyed it (:

Also thank-you for the group-request!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) That I did. Really.

:hmm: when? :paranoid:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 11, 2014   Writer
:heart:

The gallery requests I got from PoetrynProseWatchers round the same time as your comments? :)
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh those...! Well... I... (blushes, grins awkwardly)

(sigh) I like your works... but... it wasn't me... I can lend you the name of the person, if you'd like to know...
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 15, 2014   Writer
Please do, so I can thank him or her for it :rose:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) Sent a note. With his description...
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner May 17, 2014   Writer
Found it (:
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Leah084 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
Beautiful.
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you :rose:
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into-the-wild-deep Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Superbly written! Clap 
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you, truly :heart:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much :hug:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really nice flow and beautiful worrds
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you (: Happy to know you enjoyed it!
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shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More than welcome!
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, as always. :clap:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
:bow: :heart: Thank you (:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully done. :love:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you, sweet wisdom boy :tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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k4caine Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely, nicely written. ;-) x
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much~ :hug:
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