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fancy footwork steps
in tune with rhythmic drums
and sweeping guitars,

 agile bodies win
 the ladies' hearts, twirling on heels
 'n steeling shows,

   but it's the singers'
   velvet voice that puts stars
   in their eyes, conquering souls.
© KJ aka Lady Yume
~ please only share it with credit back to me; thank you :heart:

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August 1st was the start of Haikuwrimo, and though I did not feel like uploading everything, Glory-Be-style I have been writing (sets) of haiku every day, and will do so for the rest of the month.
Aiming for the more traditional 5/7/5 way (not always working, as sometimes a word extra just works better) - BUT I'm enjoying myself for the moment, limitations always seem to work for me (:

Another haiku-set; based upon the magic of musicians (: I can hardly even tire of that theme~

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A Glory Be Journal Entry
:bulletgreen: Sunday, August 25th 2013, Day 97
~ Originally started my Glory Be adventure on May 20th.
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chromeantennae Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so lovely! This just has a airy feel to it, I love it! :D
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:iconlady-yume:
Ahaha, thank you!

(This is what happens when I listen to too much K-Pop :la: - though the song by Chromeo from which I 'borrowed' the title also works ;P)
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

My pleasure! :)

 

(LOL, nice! :giggle:)

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:iconlady-yume:
Ah, thanks ever so much!
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:iconmetarukitsune:
MetaruKitsune Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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neonsquiggle Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The rhythm was lovely. Keep writing!
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:iconlady-yume:
:bow: Thank you for your kind words :heart:
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:iconflo996:
This is how I feel when I dance :D
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:iconlady-yume:
It feels marvellous, not? :heart:
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